I love how it really holds out on me in the intro
but maybe the drums came in a little bit too soon..
or maybe it was that syncopated guitar sound, it just seemed a little unnecessary.
great chords and great sounding instrument well done.
I think replace the guitar with a modern bass sound or perhaps a slightly more dynamic synth...
its up to you.
PROS:
Chords where great (if a little repetitive)
drums fun interesting
ambience
CONS:
'heavy' guitar
slightly repetitive
i gave u 5